Love Wins – Quadrille

Jan 27, 2021 | dVerse | 10 comments

Today’s prompt comes from dVerse. Here are the rules for the Quadrille:

Today’s challenge, should you choose to accept it, is to write a quadrille poem. If you’re new to dVerse or the quadrille, it’s simply a poem of 44 words (excluding the title.) You MUST use the word “way” in your poem.

To say, I’d lost my way,
minimizes the dark bowels
 to where I’d strayed.

All light had fled the scene,
hiding in forests deep
within the minds of fiends.

Yet, His song surfs the winds
melodies of hope, and
promises penned.

Love wins…

© 2021 The Hermit Creative, all rights reserved.

10 Comments

  1. msjadeli

    “Yet.” What a turn! Indeed! Wonderful response to the prompt.

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    • thehermitcreative

      Thank you so much for the wonderful prompt you gave us to work with. Sometimes a word or a touch comes out of the blue that shines hope so bright we can’t help but be changed!

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      • msjadeli

        You’re very welcome and agreed <3

  2. calmkate

    so glad you are healing, this is powerfully written!

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    • thehermitcreative

      Thank you! It has been a progressive healing. Each day better than the next.

      Reply
      • calmkate

        well done, give yourself a treat!

  3. Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    There are those really dark places…
    your poem made me think of Psalm 23:4…

    “Yea, though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death…”

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    • thehermitcreative

      Yes, it was exactly a time as in Psalm 23! There are those dark times, but there is always something to hope for.

      Reply
  4. Dora

    “His song surfs the wind” — to find us, lift us, out into the light again. I loved the lyrical quality to this psalm of promises kept, hope proffered, as “love wins”! Glad to have read this last thing before bed. 🙏🙏

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    • thehermitcreative

      Thank you so much, Dora! His promise are what keep us going. Through good times and the dark times.

      Reply

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